Today is Six Sentence Sunday!
I’ve finally managed to get my link up on the site so this week I am participating officially!
Still experimenting with first person POV, and d’ya know what? I’m really enjoying it
In my first life, when I lived in France, my bed was straw. In my second life, in Italy, I laid on a large white bed, surrounded by vases of flowers, my body draped in the finest silk. Now, in what I call, my third life, I am a prisoner in a two up two down tiny terraced house in a small town in Northern England.
I don’t mind the cold and the rain, i was expecting that. But what I wasn’t expecting was how much John would change. I’m trapped and he has my passport.
This was part of a piece that a wrote about a poor French girl who tries to better herself. Unfortunately, in Italy she meets a man who, after promising her the earth, whisks her back to England to a life of misery (he turns out to be a right nasty bit of work!).

photo courtesy of Darren Robertson/freedigitalphotos
Poetic justice for being greedy? Or will the Italian Stallion come to England to rescue her?
Ah that sounds so sad
what do you do with your 6 sentences? Is it just a case of you are trying something out or do you plan to use them in a book?
My 6 sentences come from the prompts I do every day Sam. I kind of start a new story every single day lol. So by the 31st December I’ll have 365 story ideas lol. Some of them are really rubbish, but some have potential
Not sure if any of them will go any further than their current form to be honest lol
Xx
Wow that does take dedication.
I really like this one V, very much! xx
Awwwww, thanks honey
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Hey you finally made it! 1st POV is good for the intimate feeling. I wrote in 1st and not changing to 3rd. Why? I don’t know. Past lives eh? I’m doing that alo for Phoebe
I did! thanks Sue
I’m still not sure which I prefer you know lol
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