Oooooo, my first one! ๐
Soooo, as you know, I haven’t exactly got a WIP at the moment, although I am currently working on a pocket novel for Sally Quilford’s Pocket Novel Course.
So I’ll give you six sentences from that ๐
“Oh for heavens sake Danny, what is the matter with you? Can’t I even have a coffee in peace?”
Kate and Francesca watched open mouthed along with the rest of the customers as Harry stood up. His chair scraping violently against the floor.
He made his way to the sugar stand and grabbed a handful of serviettes. Rushing back to his table his eyes met Kate’s.
It’s a romance, can you tell? Lol ๐
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I like them. What is serviettes?
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Thanks hon ๐
Whoops….napkins lol
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Good job!
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Thanks honey ๐
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He was mad about having his coffee disturbed. Seriously. ๐
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Ahhhhh, but his stress levels are through the roof lol. I’ll be doing a synopsis for this next week so I’ll post it ๐
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Tantalising! Who is Danny? Did Harry speak the first sentence, and what has Danny done to disturb the peace? I guess he’s spilled coffee everywhere. Is he a child? it’s interesting, reading this out of context.
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Danny is a 10 year old boy ๐ Yep, Harry spoke the first sentence ๐
I’ll post the synopsis soon and it should become a bit clearer lol
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Nice job! Look forward to hearing more Ihope as you go!
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You’ll definitely be hearing more about Kate & Harry ๐
Thanks honey xx
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What is a serviette?
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So Robin, I’m being soooo British lol
It’s a paper napkin ๐
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