Today is Six Sentence Sunday!
I’ve finally managed to get my link up on the site so this week I am participating officially! 🙂
Still experimenting with first person POV, and d’ya know what? I’m really enjoying it 🙂
In my first life, when I lived in France, my bed was straw. In my second life, in Italy, I laid on a large white bed, surrounded by vases of flowers, my body draped in the finest silk. Now, in what I call, my third life, I am a prisoner in a two up two down tiny terraced house in a small town in Northern England.
I don’t mind the cold and the rain, i was expecting that. But what I wasn’t expecting was how much John would change. I’m trapped and he has my passport.
This was part of a piece that a wrote about a poor French girl who tries to better herself. Unfortunately, in Italy she meets a man who, after promising her the earth, whisks her back to England to a life of misery (he turns out to be a right nasty bit of work!).
photo courtesy of Darren Robertson/freedigitalphotos
Poetic justice for being greedy? Or will the Italian Stallion come to England to rescue her?
The View Outside 
Ah that sounds so sad 😦 what do you do with your 6 sentences? Is it just a case of you are trying something out or do you plan to use them in a book? 🙂
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My 6 sentences come from the prompts I do every day Sam. I kind of start a new story every single day lol. So by the 31st December I’ll have 365 story ideas lol. Some of them are really rubbish, but some have potential 😉
Not sure if any of them will go any further than their current form to be honest lol
Xx
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Wow that does take dedication. 🙂
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I really like this one V, very much! xx
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Awwwww, thanks honey 🙂
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Hey you finally made it! 1st POV is good for the intimate feeling. I wrote in 1st and not changing to 3rd. Why? I don’t know. Past lives eh? I’m doing that alo for Phoebe
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I did! thanks Sue 🙂
I’m still not sure which I prefer you know lol 😉
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