Todays randomly generated word for the A-Z Challenge is…
Dance…
Dana looked at the digital clock display on the cooker, twenty past three. It was unusual for Sophie to be out so late, she was normally in by two when she went clubbing, especially as she had got home from work that night saying she was tired. Terry said Dana was mad, waiting up for the kids. “They’re adults now love.” He often pointed out as he rolled his eyes at her. But Dana couldn’t sleep when Sophie or her brother Joe were out, so there wasn’t much point in going to bed.
Terry had headed upstairs at midnight leaving Dana alone with her tea, the remains of which were now sitting cold in a mug on the kitchen table. The ashtray next to it overflowing with cigarette butts and ash. Dana thought about her own young adulthood. She had loved to dance, and Sophie had inherited that gene.
She flicked, uninterested, through one of Sophie’s celebrity magazines that she’d left on the table. Her eyes stung with tiredness, unable to focus on the words. She felt uneasy, a feeling of dread had begun to well in her stomach. She checked her mobile phone. Should she text her daughter? Or would that only make her worry more if there was no reply?
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She paced the terracotta tiles. Sophie had joked once that one day she would come home to discover her mother had worn a groove into the floor and replayed their last conversation in her head.
“Have you got everything? Phone? Keys?”
“Yes mum.”
“And make sure you have enough money left over for a taxi.”
“Ok mum, I’m not a child, I’m 22!”
But what Sophie didn’t understand was that to Dana, she was a child, her child, and no matter how old she was, Dana would still worry about her.
The knock at the door made Dana jump, and it took her a moment to realise what the noise was. Confused, she fastened her dressing gown and made her way down the hallway, turning on the light. Hadn’t Sophie said she took her keys?
The sight of two police officers standing on the doorstep was something Dana would never forget, but it was the screams, her screams, that would haunt her for the rest of her life…
Sorry, a bit morbid that one. I hate it when my kids go out at night 😦 Think I’ve been watching too much CI lol
**All fiction that appears on this blog during April has been written LIVE and is in first draft form. No editing (apologies, my grammar is appalling lol), spell checks (unless WordPress has come up with an error), research or rewrites have been done.
There’s nothing wrong with morbid 😉 that’s a good little flash story 🙂
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Thanks Peter 🙂 x
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Not cheerful, but realistic.
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Unfortunately, yes Patsy 😦 x
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The morbid does hit like a brick, but it’s a good piece of flash. Scary stuff.
Alex Hurst, fantasy author in Japan, participating in Blogging A-Z April Challenge.
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Thanks Alex 🙂 x
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The thing is these days you actually have to worry about the boys more than the girls, so many idiots out there demanding people ‘respect’ them without having the slightest idea what the word means and knowing that there are very little consequences for their actions
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Very true Paula 😦 I worry just as much about my sons as I do about my daughter….it’s almost like life seems to mean nothing nowadays *sighs* x
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Let’s face it, writing stories we can’t always have a happy ending, but please come back tomorrow with something exciting, erotic or at least, entertaining. Oooops, hope I’m not being egotistic. This is your challenge and you’re doing fine!
love Sue X
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Ha ha ha, thanks Sue, but you should know that I don’t “do” happy endings… I’m more of a riches to rags kind of writer than a rags to riches 😉 But I’ll try, just for you x
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Nightmare scenario for all parents!! X
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Totally….and at what age do you stop worrying? 😦 xx
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My mother used to say she could never sleep when I went out until she knew I was home. I can’t imagine what parents go through now.
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I know exactly where she’s coming from there Sydney….only last week I was up until 2 waiting for one of my sons to come in xx
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Every parent’s nightmare.
xxx Massive Hugs xxx
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Definitely 😦 Thanks David xx
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Oooh, creepily fantastic!
Sarah Allen
(From Sarah, With Joy)
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Thanks Sarah 🙂 xx
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A darker tale than the three before it. A very enjoyable read! 🙂
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Thanks Nina 🙂 xx
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