Finally There?


Assignment 3

Spell check…..Done
Tense…..Altered where needed
Internal Monologue…..Added
Reflective Commentary…..Written
All typed up and ready to submit…..Nearly lol 😉

I just need to check it over one more time and then I can e mail it to my tutor 🙂

Yesterday, along with faffing about with my assignment I was also thinking about the complexity of Characters. What makes a good character? Well, if you think about people you know they’re all multi faceted, layered, and you only get to see what they want you to see…..do you ever really know someone?…….and why is that?

It’s all about the stuff we hide and why we hide it. Does such a thing as ‘an open book’ really exist? Or are they actually a dark horse? We hide sides of our personality that we are embarrassed about or uncomfortable with. We hide to control the way we’re perceived. We want to appear stronger, wiser, sexier, more successful, younger or more mature than we really are. So what do people hide? What would a person spend a lifetime concealing? What would a person take to their grave without ever revealing? What secrets do people keep?

No person is all good…..

No person is all bad…..

…..our fictional characters should be just like real people. Not only do they have to get up and go to work, put the rubbish out or feed the cat, they, like us, have layered personalities, issues and secrets.

Wouldn’t fiction, and life, be dull, if we didn’t? 😉

Editing, Editing, and Rediting


I spent most of yesterday editing a 2700 word section of my Nano Novella to use as my 3rd OCA Assignment which is due in on the 20th of December.

I chose a section that contains narrative and dialogue but the other requirement is for the piece to contain internal monologue, which currently, it doesn’t 😦

Internal Monologue is a narrative technique that shows the thoughts passing through the protagonists mind. Sounds simple yeah? Lol…..well not really. You can’t say he/she thought, that wouldn’t be Internal Monologue. It has to be more direct. It’s like a stream of consciousness in which the author shows the thoughts of a single individual in the same order these thoughts occur inside the characters head. The author shouldnt attempt to provide (or only minimally) any commentary or description to help the reader untangle the thoughts, nor should the author sort them into grammatically correct sentences. It’s like the reader overhearing the characters thoughts and the narrator disappears and the POV overlaps…… Now, does that make sense? Lol

Virginia Woolf uses the technique in Mrs Dalloway:

“It seemed to her as she drank the sweet stuff that she was opening long windows,
stepping out into some garden. But where? The clock was striking – one, two, three:
how sensible the sound was; compared with all this thumping; like Septimus himself.
She was falling asleep.”

I’ve been trying to get my head round this whole concept, and I think I’ve finally cracked it. It helps the reader connect more with the character and yes, when you add some to your 3rd person narrative it kinda makes the whole thing feel less detached…..the famous show don’t tell rule.

So today will be spent adding Internal Monologue……and sorting out my “tense” lol. I am officially a nightmare when it comes to chopping and changing tense. The weird thing is, when my husband had a look he said most of the tense errors were to do with one character in particular. Haven’t got a clue how I managed that! 😉

The Writers Notebook


When I attended the first lesson of a local Creative Writing Class (run by Philip Kane) he told us to create a Writers Notebook. Looking back, it was the best piece of advice I’ve had over the course of the last 15 months. Since then I have managed to fill 8 notepads…..the medium Moleskin size.

When I started the OCA course, they advised the same, but also suggested I have a “commonplace” book. A book to contain all the visual material that catches your eye. Hmmmm, now call me a rebel, but I decided to ignore that and just use the one book for everything, which is what I do 🙂

My notebook and I are inseparable 😉 It’s the equivalent of an artists sketchbook, a place to store ideas, observations, practice skills, jot down information, review books and films, and keep cuttings that interest me. I also have a folder for larger cuttings that won’t fit in the book. I use it to make notes on my course, words and ideas that I need to research, examples of writing that I love (inc poetry and inspirational quotes) and writing prompts should writers block ever strike, which, I have to say, it never has lol…..sorry, but it hasn’t, and I put that down to my notebooks. Not a day goes by that I don’t write something in it 🙂

As I said before, I’m a visual person as well as a word person, so I was thrilled when I read Lesley Thomson’s A Kind Of Vanishing, to see that in the back of the book was a whole section where Lesley explained her inspiration and the connection between her writing and her photography. I take a lot of pictures and it suddenly dawned on me that I could use my own pictures to inspire stories and characters. So now, I do that too 🙂

I use art to inspire title ideas and have at least 2 lists of character names in each notepad. Even when I’m watching TV I’m taking notes….. The Jeremy Kyle Show has suddenly become very interesting 😉

Writing Books


I’m a huge fan of writing books, in fact, I’m an addict lol. It all started with The Five Minute Writer last year, which I worked my way through over the course of a few months. Great book (IMO) and I thoroughly enjoyed the exercises.

At the moment I’m using The Writers Workbook by Caroline Sharp. It’s pretty good, but some of the exercises are a bit long winded lol.

I’m currently practicing research…..the task is to pick a place and a year, then ask yourself 20 questions regarding life in that time at that place. I’ve always been fascinated with the Victorian period, since I was a teenager…..I tend to be drawn to Victorian antiques and jewellery and love Victorian architecture (my house was built in 1891). When I was growing up people use to joke that it had something to do with my name ;o) So, it was inevitable that I chose London (my home town) and 1850 for my research project.

Initially I thought that would be pretty easy……ha ha ha, oh I’m so naive lol…..it’s proving to be a little more difficult than I thought lol. the Internet is a wealth of information, but it’s so easy to end up 20 web sites later a million miles away from what you originally started reading.

Here’s my 20 questions>>>>>>

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The first 7 were given in the book, the rest are my own. It’s been an interesting task and I’ve learnt a lot……but the main lesson has been that I won’t be setting my next novel in a small town in Kansas in 1934 lol

Pen Name


After our TGIO party in Maidstone yesterday I have decided that I really do need to have a pen name lol…..pompous I know, but hold on, hear me out ;o)

At the moment there is an American author who seems to be very successful (cosy crime I think) who shares my full name…..hmmmm, not good, she even has the domain names I’d need *pout*

If I call myself by the name I usually go by, ie shortened first name, I share it with a very famous murder victim who was killed at the side of a motorway about 12 years ago……even worse! 😦

Sooooo, what name? It needs to still feel like me (IMO), I need to feel comfortable with it and be available for domain names lol. I’ve come up with 2 options that I like, that I could live with, that incorporate my husbands name as a surname (that way I can get him to help me…sneaky huh?).

Problem? Stella Whitelaw’s words of advice are still ringing in my ears. She told me that if I was going to have a pen name, to choose something that is at the beginning of the alphabet, so that my books would always be at the front, and she should know, being a “W” lol. She said looking back now, she wishes she’d chose an “A” surname.

So that leaves me with a dilemma doesnt it….my husband being an “R” lol

Why oh why couldn’t I have married an Alan 😉

Analysis


I spent yesterday doing the exercise with the list…..very scary but an eye opener, as it made me realise what elements were missing (internal dialogue for example) and how, by adding those, I can make my writing sound and appear so much better 🙂

I went to Tunbridge Wells yesterday as my daughter had to do a training session, so I sat in Starbucks for an hour, with my notepad and did a few character sketches. Thoroughly enjoyable, especially the lady I christened “Maggie” a retired air stewardess, who, on the outside is vivacious, always smiling and up for a laugh…..trouble is, she never married, and now, the loneliness has crept in and the house is too quiet, so she avoids going home.

Then I went in Waterstones (has to be done!) and bought yet another writing book…..whoops!

Today I’m going to a TGIO Nano Party in Maidstone (that’s Thank God It’s Over for non Wrimos) so we can celebrate our success/failure lol. I spent over an hour last night doing a spell check on my Novella and still only got up to page 54 of 67 lol…..will have to finish that at the weekend *slump* as I’m using part of it for my assignment……which is:

A short story or extract from a longer story that makes extensive use of direct speech, as well as some internal monologue

2500 to 3000 words……. So I need to do a bit of editing, add some internal monologue and submit by the 20th. Piece of cake? Ha ha ha……we’ll see 😉

Procrastination…..


Ok, so what little time I had available yesterday was spent procrastinating lol….. I spent about an hour fiddling with my Blogger Blog, uploaded my Nano novella to get verification on the word count, and chose a section of my Nano Novella to use for my current exercise on the course.

Plan for today? Supermarket shopping then crack on and get those bloody questions nailed lol….so that I can actually start the assignment tomorrow *grin*

Yesterday I had to go up to Surbiton with my daughter, well, I didn’t have to go, but I enjoy the hustle and bustle of London, I like to people watch 😉 There are some pretty strange people on trains and as I take my notebook everywhere, I write anything I see down 🙂 Like, the man who was already on the train when we got on……he only looked about 35 facially, but his hair was nearly all grey…… He was dressed like a builder but had a large black bucket and a shovel. Or the young girl, about 20 in the fur jacket, who got on where we got on and spend the whole 1 hour journey preening herself until getting off at London Bridge.

People’s lives fascinate me, I love characterisation, it’s my favourite part of writing….. I can sit for hours (and often do lol) with my notebook, making up characters. There’s a book, and I wish I could remember its title or the author 😦 The title is a number. The author wrote about a tube train he gets everyday where he sees the same people sitting in the carriage, so it’s like little cameos of people/characters…….I must try and find out what it’s called, would love to read it. Apparently, I found out a few days ago Jonathan Kemps new book, entitled 26 is in a similar vein, so I’m looking forward to that 😉

Right, must crack on, but before I go……At Waterloo Station yesterday I spotted this>>>>>>

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I love words, and something like that just had me smiling for the rest of the journey 🙂

Modern Technology


I’m posting today’s update from my iPad, thought I’d download the App and give it a go. Hmmmm, not bad so far lol, we’ll see what it looks like when it’s published 😉

This kinda got me thinking about my recent Nano Novella (I’m calling it a novella rather than a novel at the moment lol) and the fact that with 3 under 25’s in it, there is no reference to modern technology other than the MC checking her mobile for e mails. Something that needs sorting in the re-write I think 😉 Perhaps I’m just so use to all the kit we have around us now that I didn’t feel the need to refer to it specifically? Or is it because I am a certain age it doesn’t really orbit my world?

And talking of modern technology, what an abundance of options are available to the write now, who wants to publish…..it’s a minefield……give me a traditional book any day! Lol.

Today will consist of taking a piece of my writing (that is narration and dialogue and applying some questions…..these questions>>>>>

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Not sure exactly if that worked, I guess I’ll see when I publish this……anyway, yesterday I had to use the question on a piece by Nina Milton, an author I’m unfamiliar with (my Amazon wish list has grown significantly since starting this course lol) which was a simple enough task…..but applying it to my own writing *gulp* will highlight just how crap it really is LMAO

Oh well, wish me luck 😉

Screenwriting


I finished Nano last night…..28 days and I produced 50100 words, but more importantly, to me, is the fact that I actually have a finished story….a beginning, a middle and an end. I am so pleased with myself, but now, it’s back to work on the course.

My current task? Writing for TV/Films…..to turn an already written extract into something that resembles part of a screenplay. I’m beginning to think this script writing is much easier than novel writing. I’m a visual person, always have been, I can see something in my mind, but then try to describe it in words, get it down on paper *shudders*, that’s where I tend to fall flat 😦

I chose to do a scene from my current Nano story, where the MC, middle aged and overweight Christine meets the love interest Harry (who just happens to be considerably younger and very attractive) for a coffee, which culminates in fish and chips and wine from plastic cups consumed on a park bench (he couldn’t afford Champers darling, he’s unemployed and a bit of a nutter as it turns out but I digress). A sweet little scene which I can picture in my mind very easily. I’m not too sure that it comes across as well in the actual story (something to try to sort out in the re-write).

So this morning I finally typed it up, which means I can now move on to the next section of the course which is about Balanced Narrative…..1 exercise to go and then it’s assignment time. I’m hoping to have left myself 19 days to do it, which sounds like a lot, but with Christmas looming I can see a few late nights on the horizon 😉

Failing Miserably *snigger*


I was supposed to be using this blog to keep a record of my studies on my course, my general musings on what I’ve learnt so far, but, yet again, I’ve neglected it :o(

Sooooo, after I’ve got Nano out of the way I will try to post more regularly (famous last words) and see how we go…..

It seems that my whole life revolves around writing these days, not a day goes by that I don’t put pen to paper, which is absolutely crazy! If someone had said to me 2 years ago what my life would be like now I would have laughed!

Ive spent the last couple of days trying to turn a scene from a book into a radio play (or rather part of a radio play). It was an interesting task but a nightmare trying to choose the book. I’d recently read Iain McEwans Saturday and prior to that Anne Tyler’s Ladder Of Years, but being the BookCrosser that I am at heart, once I’ve read a book it’s straight out the door, so neitheroff these were in my possession. I finally decided on Angela Carters Love, a pretty morbid book to be honest lol. Found a section of dialogue between the main character and a psychiatrist and turned it into a radio play. Quite pleased with the result although my husbands comment……there’s not enough background noise, its too quiet……ummmmm, it’s a psychiatrists consulting room? *head desk*